1)Easy and smoothly sentence 2)Too difficult 3)Comic strips 4)Too many home work 5)I can not unedrstand that the only english explanation. Please used more japanese.
I will go to OKINAWA with my in sommer vacation. I will play Scuba Diving. I hearfd MIYAKOJIMA is very beautiful. MIYAKOJIMA's sea is very nice view. It's the first time to go to OKINAWA for me. I am looking forward to going to OKINAWA very much. I want to enjoying OKINAWA.